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Just started writing this song and I really like the feel for it and I could use some suggestions on what else to include in this kind of "House on a Shining Hill" picture.

Up upon a hill surrounded by the greenest grass and the bluest skies
And the cloud on the horizon opens up to show the rising sun
wooden boards and crooked paintings make up this old house
the place we used to share our dreams as one

The river streams of little people all floating by
the hymn that rings upon the bells echoes off into space
that old albatross is still hanging on the thread of the sonic plane
and its voice still goes straight into the empty corridors we left behind.

And that's it so far.
Last edited by aerocom at Nov 6, 2014,