#3
Hello

Thats a nice composition, get some interesting parts and complex melody lines. It kind of reminded me of Protest the Hero in some respects.

Mix wise, the drums were a little quite and during the synth part the backing instruments seemed to decrease in volume or were a lot quieter in comparison to the main synth part. To bring bait more clarity to the guitars experiment with a high pass filter to cut out some of the lower frequencies and this will then give bait more room for the bass and kick.

Good track overall and interesting to listen to throughout

C4C - https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1659591

Cheers, M
#5
haha, yeah. i wish i had a cleaner tone. i don't know whether it's my signal chain or the guitar itself (i'm not the cleanest solderer).
#6
Synth should be lower in the mix. Sounds out of place and too loud.
Up the drums.
Learn how to EQ/mix better.

I really ****ing like your ideas in the song, it feels like a diamond that's too rough right now.
Cool artwork too.