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Okay guys, first time posting my lyrics. Would love to hear some opinions, also could use some criticism. Only thing i wanted to note is that I'm not a native English speaker and if there are some kind of mistakes or poorly chosen words I would appreciate you pointing them out for me.


Mary is this you coming my way ?
I'm glad to see you too, but I should go for now.

These interrupted dreams i can't get out of my head
This interrupted scene of how you met me there
Before i fall asleep
Before i fall asleep

[here comes powerful chorus, and me singing one line passionately]

I hear voices in my head
I hear voices in my head
And I hear voices in my head
I hear voices in my head

Endings never meant to be
Leave me to reflect interrupted dreams
And always it comes as a surprise
Sunlight will get into my eyes

These interrupted dreams i can't get out of my head
This interrupted scene of how you met me there
Before i fall asleep
Before i fall asleep

[once again]

I hear voices in my head
I hear voices in my head
And I hear voices in my head
I hear voices in my head

So here it is, i actually have a finished recording of this song so if someone would care to listen i will post it