Thanks for the crit! I'm not a bass player so I don't know if you're missing something technically, but it sounds like you've got a good groove. One bit I will say sounded off to me was that slide at 1:25 but maybe i'm just not hearing how it fits into the whole song.
Nice job! We used to cover that tune a lot and you got the groove goin for sure.
Hey man sorry for the late c4c but that was awesome. You have great technique and a nice smooth tone. Not to mention that badass rick you got there. I love deep purple and you did it justice, nothing negative to say!