The guitar is a bit bass heavy, especially in the choruses. You're vocals are really nice, I would have thought about redoing the choruses, they were a bit weaker than the verses.

Overall it's great but. 4/5.
I'll have to give it 4/5 too, nothing really majorly wrong, playing was good and singing is on key, just sounds like its restrained, no need to hold back. :P

LET it GOO!! lol