Heres my most recent metalcore song! I know this board is dead and hates metalcore, but I am gonna keep posting them anyway. Enjoy!
Sounds pretty cool, definitely something I would mix, one point may be to add more lead sections or instruments, and maybe a solo or maybe using the outro section as a chorus and copying it earlier in the song, and then lead on from it into an epic piece. Just a thought Would definitely like to hear it with vocals too.