Hey, the vocals could probably be mixed in a little better. Also around 2.10 when the instrumentation slows down it would be cool to hear a high-cut guitar, perhaps some arpeggios or something. The whole instrumental part seems a bit repetitive, it could work as kind of a refrain but just an extra couple dispersed notes on top would go a long way.
Otherwise great track, percussion and bass in particular are nice and tight. Good work.
Check out my track when you get a chance, could do with some feedback: