Hey guys!

I've just recently finished a piece of video game music that I'm particularly proud of but I would very much like some outside opinions.

There are some problems that I think I can hear with it, but I'll let you be the judge

Here's the track, I hope you enjoy it


As always, C4C
Last edited by professorlamp at Nov 18, 2014,
The ending is interesting all right... metal version of this would kick ass. Is this the "main theme" for the game? Otherwise I don't understand your arrangement. Is it just me or is the bass way too loud?
Didn't hear much difference, perhaps it's the bass sound characteristics? I've been messing around with 8-bit stuff lately, and noticed the saw wave (is that what it's called?) is such a piercing sound.

I'm not the biggest fan of the drum kit you're using. I think this would be better with retro drum sounds - check out NES Batman. The drums should also be a bit louder.

There's my latest... though I kinda already know what to do for it.
Thanks for the advice. I've updated my original post so you might not be hearing a big difference because they're now identical

I'll take a listen to your track now, thanks again!
Love the faster melody and progression change at :23.

The open section starting at :54 is also pretty sweet.

Great fill into the part at 1:18.

I love the ending. I'm not sure if you actually plan to write for games, but I have in the past, and one thing to keep an eye on is how your music loops. In this case, it loops REALLY well if you remove the delay repeats/fade-out at the end.

I just realized your music player's a little weird, so some of the timestamps may be a bit off.

Overall, this is great, I can really see it as a dungeon or boss battle theme.

C4C? Links are in my sig.
Ha. I just love it mate. I think I'm going to take out my old SNES, see if it works lol and go play something on it. I can definitely see this in a game. By the way, why aren't you uploading to SoundCloud or something? I would follow you in a heartbeat to see what you're creating.

On a sidenote, I did something jazzy and electronic a couple of days ago. Do you think you have the time to listen to this and give me some feedback? Cheers .