The start of this reminds me of a mixture between Death Cab For Cutie and the music in the game Destiny. Great stuff so far.

I was really hoping there'd be a heavy part after all that buildup but it sort of just kept going. I wouldn't have minded hearing some distorted guitar crushing on the downbeats after a couple minutes.

Great song but, very relaxing and inspired.
You get a very full sound out of your one guitar; I can only imagine how pretty this could sound with another track or two doing melodies. I'd try changing effects/your tone in order to define section changes. You could also gain a lot by adding some percussion; even just adding a tambourine or floor tom would add a lot of movement to this piece.

I think the part at 5:20 could transition into something bigger, like a part two to the song.

Overall, I really liked this.
C4C? Links are in my sig.
love this man! seriously good shit the atmosphere is great it feels almost like tears of the lid near the end
def keep it up would love to hear more