#1
Hey, I'm looking for feedback on the overall arrangement, instrumentation and the mix in this track. It's the first one in the link.

https://soundcloud.com/the-underknowns/tracks

This was recorded a few months ago, but all in one night. It wasn't intended to end up like this but now I'm wondering if it's fit for release the way it is.

Thanks!
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#2
bass could be a bit tighter/trebblier.

maybe try repeating the phrase 'in front of your eyes' in the first chorus, i felt that might have been a better use of space for a pop song.

great harmonies. synth is synth - always awesome.

very interesting song, all in all. not unique but definitely pleasantly surprising.

band/recording in general could be a bit tighter - i'd be interested in hearing a current/polished track

C4C - https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1662175
by the way, i stole this riff.
#3
Jrizzo - Thanks for the insight! That's a good idea on the "in front of your eyes" part.

The room I was recording in was probably not the best space - a large, oblong basement. I think that's why it isn't as tight as it should be. There is added reverb too.

We're pretty new to recording stuff, so I don't know if there's a really polished track, but you could check out the second track in this playlist. I spent a lot more time on that. Maybe too much time!
https://soundcloud.com/the-underknowns/tracks

PS Why is UG censoring the word k-i-t-c-h-en? The track is titled ******* Sink.
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