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What do you guys think about those lines?
What do you suggest to continue the flow of it?
It was created to be a hard rock/heavy metal song.
Thanks!

Enclosed Spaces

There's no memory left
When you walked out the door
Only those soaring voices
Driving you insane... more and more

God bless them...

The old man knows what to do
But he can't anyhow
That young man got his breaking point
What would you tell him now?

Has God blessed him?

Chorus:

Keeping the mind busy
Ignoring too many faces
No one dares to dream
In those gray enclosed spaces