I liked it over all, but thought some of the lead parts sounded strange. Like it was improvised and you started to do something like a sweep (and I HATE sweeping, just personal preference but I can't stand it) then changed your mind after a few notes or something. To me it made it sound a little out of place in a few parts. If that was what you were going for though, then I guess it's a good thing, but it sort of made me disconnect a few times.

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