Took a song I wrote a little while ago and reworked some of the lyrics. As of now they're not complete, but any feedback would be greatly appreciated.

With each thought new, one disappears
Haven’t really spoke with anyone in years

What’s the point in even trying?
From the minute we’re born, we’re all dying
I can feel myself aging in my nerves
Would someone tell me what purpose this serves?

Life and death, while the same, know the difference
The difference is what you make of the two

Back and forth you’re working nine-to-five
They can see the pain in your stride
Plastic-mold smile, you’ve known how for a while
Every car just looks the same mile after mile