Hi, good effort there.
If I was producing, I'd get the vocal delivery changed a bit for some of the different parts of the song.
There was a pitchy moment or two, but that's forgiven cos it's a demo and probably not done in a pro studio.
There's something a bit 'jazz' with the guitar around 2:45 to my ears.
Thumbs up for the guitar solo.

Can imagine this in a movie or in a moody scene in a drama.

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