#1
Hello. I've never posted lyrics before , but i would like to make this a regular thing.
comments would be much appreciated.

Haven’t visited the catacomb in a while
To find my desperate insanity
Or satisfy my knowledge
Your prevailing effect on me.

Go ahead, lie to me
Manipulate me, not the first time I’ve felt
Forgetfulness and decadence

Criticize the plan of survival
To arrogant to see
Nature nurtures in time
Lie awake in a whispered tragedy

None of your problems matter don’t you see?
I’ve made a phantom of misjudgment
None of your troubles mattered to me,
Your Forgetfulness and this decadence
Go ahead, lie to me
Manipulate me, not the first time I’ve felt this
Forgetfulness and decadence
#2
Having a bit of trouble depicting what this is about, Love the use of the descriptive words, and it flows very nicely, keep up the good work
#3
^ thanks that means a lot. I wasn't super confident about posting my stuff but I did it anyway. So its very reassuring that its not terrible
#4
No problem, After all, it's impossible to improve in writing if you don't get criticism once in a while.