First thing: Don't be so hard on yourself. The quality is actually pretty good, and much better than my first attempts.

It sounds great, musically. I'm not sure what kind of music you're trying to create, but it sounds spacey and proggy. Come back when you have the full song, I imagine it would be worth a listen.

Mind checking my song out Hangman For Hire? I'd like to know what you think in my thread (or on Soundcloud.)
Thank you for your kind words. I usually write what I just hear in my head,be it rock,blues or this spacey,proggy metal I linked. The song is actually complete,but I didn't record the whole thing since I have an isolation cab being built and I want to be able to really crank up my amp for a better tone. I also listened to your track and left a comment in your thread,keep it up!