#1
Hey guys,

This is my first time uploading something i've recorded, please feel free to give any remarks. The track is not really a song, it's more a sort of short ambient jam.
I'm not really looking for critique on the recording but more the actual playing.

Thanks

https://soundcloud.com/urannavana/horizon
#2
On the actual playing of guitar in this song, the phrasing actually isn't too bad, your bends are a little bit suspect in the middle of the track.

It's an interesting track to be fair, you should consider making it into an actual song.

If you would like to return the favour C4C here: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=33149460#post33149460
#3
Thanks for the comment, I really appreciate it and I'll certainly give your track a look.