so, guys...like an hour ago i decided to made a song that kinda emulate the style of Periphery and Protest the Hero in one song. I dont know but at first I think that the song is flowing good, however when I listen it again and again...I am lost....I dont know where to go from there, I think it sucks. I believe that your help and suggestion is what I needed

thanks a lot man
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