Ahoy fellas!

Just wanted to post my original song....I started to write this song last night and it's not finished yet. I am kinda stuck. Maybe I can get things or two from your feedback guys....The inspiration of this song... I dont know, it's kinda written fast so I cannot think of any inspiration behind this song yet hahaha....

I hope to have some feedback on my song
Last edited by rezaakbar.felay at Jan 4, 2015,
i really like the riffs at the end but the intro seems too dissonant to me. the chorus is cool and the ending is cool though