#2
I do not know a lot about recording, producing or coming up with own compositions, so i can't give you any real 'feedback'. I just came by to tell you that it sounds great!
Do you know the Gojira song Ocean planet?
#3
That's a really great track, it's something I could imagine being featured on the Candyrat YouTube Channel.

The acoustic guitar sound is really crisp and clear. There's no real muddiness and the bass line part isn't drowning out the higher melody parts. Very nice chord progressions and melody.

It's all positive feedback from me haha, no real criticisms to make;

C4C - Please can you check out my track over this link, appreciate your feedback https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1662689
#4
Quote by menjy
I do not know a lot about recording, producing or coming up with own compositions, so i can't give you any real 'feedback'. I just came by to tell you that it sounds great!
Do you know the Gojira song Ocean planet?


Thanks! I do actually yeah haha, didn't really want to copy the title but it's the only thing I came up with that fit the song
#5
Just started up Ocean Planet - Acoustic guitar is exceptionally clear and smoothly played. Was this all just one take through? I'm listening through a second time, still trying to find something to critique but I'm not sure there's anything about this I'd change. The production and playing are both on point. If it were me, I'd probably be experimenting with layering some atmospheric synths in and stuff like that, but there's something to be said for the relatively minimalist approach to this arrangement. It allows every note to stand out and there are some great little runs scattered through here and there that keep you hooked the whole time (not that you wouldnt anyway since the song is short sweet and never lacking). I wish I felt like I was more helpful here but I just thoroughly enjoyed this track.

I posted a couple songs here if you want to check out where I'm coming from
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1665410
#6
Digging the intro to this. Loving the composition of the riff and the progression and phasing of the song.

Very easy to listen to, the production seems spot on, playing is spot on, Honestly can't find anything wrong with this track at all man, its just excellent.

Keep em coming!
C4C:
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1666647
#7
Ok the good - you're fingerpicking style is really nice and you've got a fantastic tone coming through. The bad- nothing really seems to happen, it doesn't go anywhere so it couldn't be much more than a background track in my opinion.

On a side note I really liked 'acoustic song' as it doesn't fall into that trap.

C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1666751
#9
Quote by jmako
Just started up Ocean Planet - Acoustic guitar is exceptionally clear and smoothly played. Was this all just one take through? I'm listening through a second time, still trying to find something to critique but I'm not sure there's anything about this I'd change. The production and playing are both on point. If it were me, I'd probably be experimenting with layering some atmospheric synths in and stuff like that, but there's something to be said for the relatively minimalist approach to this arrangement. It allows every note to stand out and there are some great little runs scattered through here and there that keep you hooked the whole time (not that you wouldnt anyway since the song is short sweet and never lacking). I wish I felt like I was more helpful here but I just thoroughly enjoyed this track.

I posted a couple songs here if you want to check out where I'm coming from
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1665410


Yeah it was one take man I think my shocking editing skills would ruin it if I did any more haha, cheers for the review dude I'll check out your stuff. I like the synth idea but I don't have the means to do it unfortunately :/

Quote by aaron aardvark
Crabman,
Guitar sounds very good (playing, riffs & audio quality)! Some good vocals wouldn't hurt, but nice as is. Please review my music at this link:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1665058


Thanks! I intend to add vocals eventually, need to get some lyrics I am happy with first though!
Last edited by Crabman429 at Jan 12, 2015,
#10
love the intro on guitar its beautiful

I think vocals and lyrics could take this song even better places mind if have a go at writing some vocal lines/melodies and some lyrics??? ha ha (I've been humming this to myself for a few mins and have come up with a cool vox line)

c4c? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1666946
#11
Quote by InnerDream
love the intro on guitar its beautiful

I think vocals and lyrics could take this song even better places mind if have a go at writing some vocal lines/melodies and some lyrics??? ha ha (I've been humming this to myself for a few mins and have come up with a cool vox line)

c4c? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1666946

Thanks! yeah man sure, go for it, be sure to send me it when it's done :P. I'll check it out