#1
G D
Do you remember You were in your room
EM C
Outside were a field of people
G Am
With smile on their faces
(why am i not like them)
EM C
Bring light to this world
G D
Are you listening to the screaming
EM C
Of the one who you loved
(all my fault again~)
G D
Feeling like you're a demon
EM C
Fueling an~xie~ty
(I'm sorry)

I guess am not part of humanity
In a shell that decipher me
Looking out to all I'll ever see
Like the light binding on to me

Deep deep in the soul
A devil reside within cold
Calling me out to take the blow
Delivering me to a crazy world

But life is what it all about
Able to defect and rebound
Till I drop dead and fell down
Till then I'll blow this round

{chorus}
So now ~ where will I go from here, with all my hate inbound kept inside~~
I am unable to breath , to live to stop this living hell, burst me out before the devil get me , before the devil get me

It's not just this place
The entire world
Trying to break me into
A million pieces

It's not just the hate
It all of civilization
That trying to get me down
I'll rise again~~~~~~~

Yeah life is what it all about
Able to defect and rebound
Till I drop dead
Till then I'll blow this all up

The song is by me
More or less completed
Chording it now any suggesting if chord will be great TYTY
Noob guitarist here
#2
This is not bad, although I think you might get better reponses elsewhere. This section of the forum is for criticizing lyrics and poetry only(?), as for the content of this piece. Think about what you just wrote, and try to imagine how it would be without giving yourself out too much. Make the reader and yourself think otherwise, line by line. These stanzas almost fulfills that, imo. And are your best.

I guess am not part of humanity
In a shell that decipher me
Looking out to all I'll ever see
Like the light binding on to me

Deep deep in the soul
A devil reside within cold
Calling me out to take the blow
Delivering me to a crazy world

But life is what it all about
Able to defect and rebound
Till I drop dead and fell down
Till then I'll blow this round

So besides that, correcting some spelling mistakes shouldn't be that difficult. Post your song here when you are finished, as lyrics in itself doesn't do justice when it comes to songwriting.