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Hey guys. This is a song I wrote while I was playing that chord progression outside in the summer of 2013. I was sitting there and my cat was inside, looking through the window, willing to come with me because she saw the birds

I just want you to criticize it. Note that this is WAY out of my comfort as I usually write metal/hard rock.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kjXe9lVMR3M