#1
https://soundcloud.com/impendingcb/1218a

I don't know if this is the right place to ask, but I recently made this song and am looking for any areas to improve, whether it be technique, mastering, or simply content.
Current Gear:
Schecter SGR C-7 (Pickups swapped for Dimarzo D Activators)
POD UX1
Marshall MG100DFX Amp
Other Stuff:
Jackson DXMGT(My discontinued baby)
Jackson JS30DKT
Crescent Strat copy(first guitar)
Crate GX15