JJ is one of my favs with his percussive style...I think he would approve of this performance. Good guitar groove and pretty smooth vocals. What kind of recording device did you use?
"return critique requested" on my Lonesome road blues...thanks
Structurally, very well done. Flows very well. For me personally, too much effects. The guitar doesn't need it, and the vocals are overdone. I think your voice sounds good, you don't need to cover it up with the effects. Perhaps it's just how it came out in the recording, but it sounds too reverb-y, so I'd adjust that if you can. Overall good job. Will be really solid with a couple of minor changes.

I'd appreciate C4C on a similar style song.