#1
Hey guys already wrote this lyrics and I think there pretty darn revolutionary. However I understand that they are not Finnish and need a bit of tweaking. Any young budding songwriters out there want to collaborate.


What is the truth
Oh strewth
I forgot to turn the oven off
I'ts like back in turkey in the sun

I thought it would be funny
if I would be there first
i forgot what was the beggining and what was not

So i can always catch the southbound northern train
to hell and mabie back
cos im so tired of all the setbacks
don't turn off the light on your way back
#2
Sorry man, I can't find anything to work from. No offense but what is there has no consistency or structure. No theme to build on. Not even a rhyming scheme.... It may be a poem of sorts but less you have a hella melody for it vocally then lyrically it's moot.
Last edited by zmarc101 at Feb 17, 2015,