#2
I like the feel of this! nice voice with a good melody, neat gutiar and good production.

I think the song should build differently. In fact, the structures my only issue with this.
Drums coming in straight after the first 'release me' line, replacing that 'ooh' vocal line with a light guitar hook.
That guitar solo needs to wait another verse, and the song needs to should end on a repeated vocal line.
This is of course just what I would do with this song, there are bound to be better ideas.

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#3
Nice composition and arrangements! A solid tune!

Perhaps a bit too much reverb on the lead guitar @ 1.53 ? A matter of taste. Your playing is excellent, as ever.

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