Quote by monwobobbo
not bad but it lacks flow in parts. sounds like you were thinking about it way to much.

Agree. Play the underlying chords? No matter how many notes you string along, what counts musically is the structure. Its like building a fancy building without beams.....its the beams that hold the thing together not the paint on the outside. Hope this makes sense,
^That person didn't finish his/her sentence. I hope they're ok. I agree with him/her though. Endless wanking is totally boring to me. I like songs, not notes. It'd be cool if you had 2 tracks going and at least played some chords underneath to give the song more structure and depth. Yes, you do know how to play scale, but can you play them to another track or along with a band? That's what might really catch my ear, but of course, I cannot speak for everybody.

Please listen to my band in my sig!