#1
Haven't written a song in a long time, but anything to not do thesis work...

you know the lines so well
we're off page so now you can tell
exactly where the story is going to go
but you don't think I deserve to know

I see you twice a month
Bel Air calls but you don't go
so I think of how tired you look
as the silver screen starts to rust

you whisper
sing me a song
but when I improvise you say
'you've got it all wrong'

I hope some day that they eat you up
I've got a sick sad urge to say I told you so
lying on my hotel room floor
as if you've never been there before

and you ask me
to write you a song
but when I refuse you say
'you were never any fun'

I finally have your song
but wherever you are now
I bet you're not singing along
Last edited by Dylan_ at Feb 24, 2015,
#2
saskatchewan? i hear regina is nice. as is saskatoon, allegedly.

dig this mostly. i'm not a huge lyrics buff, but the piece is cohesive and the rhymes are subtle.


I hope some day that they eat you up
I've got a sick sad urge to say I told you so
lying on my hotel room floor
as if you've never been there before


this was a great image and nice development.

sorry i don't have more to say. hang around more often, i miss your works.