Maybe Dark Blues?

Sorry bout backing suckin a lil. TV was on, mean ol lady.... long story.

Nobody Loves Me

No body loves me
I don't give a damn
Nobody sees me
Or even knows who i am

I think that Death himself
Has a larger circle of friends
But that's really alright by me
Want no cryin when it ends

Don't tell me bout mercy
Cause I ain't never seen it here
And don't try to save my wretched soul
Cause I'm too damn old to hear

I've spent this life of mine
Just doin as I damn well please
Ain't no God ever looked out for me
I ain't goin down on my knees

Don't spare your pitty here
I'm sure someones more deservin
The bus to salvation left years ago
Ain't the idea I was servin

And so I'll slip away
Yeah unnoticed into the night
And after all the shit i have done
That seems just about right

Nobody loves me
I don't give a damn
I Love you man!

This could easily be done to a slower 6/8 of a blues feel... If I had an instrument near me I'd construct some chords... I'm hearing a Minor downward stepiung chromatic feel with a major change at the "Don't tell me 'bout Mercy..." perhaps an E 2 3 4, A 2 3 Bbm, Bm 2 3 4, G#m 2 3 4 (Repeat)
Thanks, I was lucky the tv hid the 2 chords I was strummin lol. Em & Asus2, then tried to cover the noise with the lead.
I'd like to have it a little more bluesy, always.
Where's the link to the track... I haven't heard the audio.

... Found it... I didn't realised the title was a link.

Definitely hearing a stronger "1-&-a-2-&-a-3" pulse in this track with the "Don't tell me 'bout Mercy..." being a change progression - acting like a chorus or refrain. Solos could be a verse-long whaling... a bit like deep purple's "mistreated" (Malmsteen does a great cover with a lot of wank of course)


This is what I'd do, but it is your track and we all have our own brand.
Last edited by andyrooj at Feb 24, 2015,
Thats cool as shit. If I could do that I doubt I'd be here lol

Never listened to Malmsteen, those vocals yeah, and the beat. But in his speed he looses me. I could never do it, outside me but really cool song
Thanks, I usually have my guitar ran into my comp but I was just messing with strummin and turned on my comp mic when that hit me.
Wasn't really planed. Appreciate your response.