#2
Good over all composition and playing technique.

I feel it is a backing track that is missing its melody. The drum loop (with phaser / flanger) becomes distracting after a few rounds with no variation.

I'd like to hear some more of your tracks.
#3
^ I agree.

Adding bass would also be a good idea - the sound is a bit empty. Definitely try doing something more interesting with the drums.

Yeah, as pointed out above, your song would need a melody or something. Now it sounds like a backing track. And it sounded a bit generic (the riffs weren't that original sounding - but adding a good melody and more interesting drums and a bassline would fix it). The part with guitar harmonies was the "highlight" of the song.
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