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Wrote this some time back, am quite happy with it, but just wanted some feedback, mostly how does the middle section sound and is it too samey? The guitar pro file has the vocal line as well. I'd like to know what you think about it as I generally struggle to write decent vocal melodies. The link is to a recording of the guitar pro with the RSE on and some keyboard, to help you hear how it sounds when it's not in midi form. I'll happily listen to and give you feedback if you would like some

https://soundcloud.com/thisboy91/guitar-idea-16
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Guitar idea 16.gp5