#3
i really like the idea of having three measures of piano and four measures of bass. it makes a lot more sense later on when everything comes in. at first it sounds a little meandering, like i'm not sure what exactly you're trying to express with all that piano (when it's just the piano playing)

i'm not a fan of that first guitar riff, some of the timing sounds off. however, the last guitar part is pretty cool. imo you should just take out the first riff and replace it with some kind of ambient melody and wait until that climax to bring in the guitar.
#4
I agree with you about the intro, so I added in some sounds that help give it a little more direction. My next goal is to replace or improve the first time that solo is used (it may not be apparent, but the glitchy solo at the end is actually the same solo manipulated).
Last edited by herby190 at Mar 19, 2015,