#1
(English is not my first language, so tell me if there's any mistake!)

Back in the afternoon, my suspicious started to emerge
You were looking down to me, with your arms crossed
And I try to understand why potray anger in my face
It's too early to make a choice, have some hope
You maybe just not saying the truth, who doesn't like lies?
Maybe I'm just exaggerating, maybe I just need some faith
Your weapon is the guilt that we all carry behind our back
Back in the afternoon, my suspicious already had a place

I'm twisted, I know
I'm sorry, I don't know
I'm perverse, I know
People say I don't understand myself, how do you expect me to understand you?
You sure think I'm wrong, and probably I'm wrong with this
But what do you expect me to believe?

I should understand my own whims, and how little you care
You say you love me, but you don't want me any close
I'm a bad person, I hurt you and I really just couldn't care less
I'd like to shred this apart, I'd love to hurt you so much more
You deserve better, I worship you, I'd never hurt you
I should understand, wait, and care how it's suppossed to be
I shall not pass, I never shall make any move
You're the angel that leads me to be who I know I should always believe in

I'm twisted, I know
I'm sorry, I don't know
I'm perverse, just **** off
People say I don't understand myself, how do you expect me to understand you?
You sure think I'm wrong, and probably I'm wrong in this
But what do you expect me to believe?

It breaks my heart to know that the flesh will never meet
But you're not the only one, even if you think you are
Looking down on everyone isn't a good way to live

I'm not twisted, I know
I'm sorry, I know
I'm not perverse, I know
People say I don't understand myself, how do you expect me to understand you?
You might think I'm wrong, and probably I'm wrong
But what I am suppossed to do?

(Thank you sooo much!)
Never Scoop Mids
#2
Quote by clocks2
(English is not my first language, so tell me if there's any mistake!)

Back in the afternoon, my suspicions started to emerge
You were looking down to me, with your arms crossed
And I try to understand why (I? or you? This needs a personal pronoun here) potray anger in my face
It's too early to make a choice, have some hope
You maybe just not saying the truth, who doesn't like lies?
Maybe I'm just exaggerating, maybe I just need some faith
Your weapon is the guilt that we all carry behind our back
Back in the afternoon, my suspicions already had a place

I'm twisted, I know
I'm sorry, I don't know
I'm perverse, I know
People say I don't understand myself, how do you expect me to understand you?
You sure think I'm wrong, and probably I'm wrong with this
But what do you expect me to believe?

I should understand my own whims, and how little you care
You say you love me, but you don't want me any closer
I'm a bad person, I hurt you and I really just couldn't care less
I'd like to shred this apart, I'd love to hurt you so much more
You deserve better, I worship you, I'd never hurt you
I should understand, wait, and care how it's suppossed to be
I shall not pass, I never shall make any move
You're the angel that leads me to be who I know I should always believe in

I'm twisted, I know
I'm sorry, I don't know
I'm perverse, just **** off
People say I don't understand myself, how do you expect me to understand you?
You sure think I'm wrong, and probably I'm wrong in this
But what do you expect me to believe?

It breaks my heart to know that the flesh will never meet
But you're not the only one, even if you think you are
Looking down on everyone isn't a good way to live

I'm not twisted, I know
I'm sorry, I know
I'm not perverse, I know
People say I don't understand myself, how do you expect me to understand you?
You might think I'm wrong, and probably I'm wrong
But what I am supposed to do? (supposed has one "s" instead of two)

(Thank you sooo much!)


Everything was mostly spelling mistakes, don't worry about your English! Mind if I ask what your first language is?

Good job here! I especially like how you switch things up throughout the repetition of the chorus. You go from "I'm twisted" to "I'm not twisted", and it's interesting how things grow and shift throughout the lyrics. Keep posting!
Today I feel electric grey
I hope tomorrow, neon black
#3
Thank you VERY much, Ganoosh! My first language is Spanish, so yea, I'm having kind of a hard time learning the whole writing thing in English. Thank you so much for telling me your opinion and correcting my mistakes!
Never Scoop Mids