#2
Hi man, liking this intro to the track has a raw edginess about it. good drum beat as well as it keeps the track alive! I also like the riff on guitar. I think your chorus to this song could be more melodic! You have a really good chorus to this track but I think it could be even better with more vocals to back you up

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#4
I like the dirty guitar sound man! drums come in..sounds good. lots of energy.. the vocals are good..but its kind of hard to understand..and the lyrics kind of loose me..i think the songwriting could be better...not a bad track though..its very catchy..i bet it would go over well live. crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1672514