Really dig the guitar layers and overall vibe of the track. It might just be me, but a couple of the drums fills seemed a little off, maybe double check those? Also perhaps the drums could use a bit of saturation to help bring them up in the mix and give the track a little more forward-drive. Just my 2 cents!

Here's my thread if you feel like checking it out. Thanks.


Good Work!
I wish it would have started before 12 seconds...anyway..cool man...really chill/deep sounding...reminded me of that song that starts out "im not a perfect person" "I found a reason the reason is you" anyway cool man..i would love to hear lyrics to this..not sure what else to say man, I like it! crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1672514
Thanks everyone! I took a listen to what everyone posted and commented back
Usually I am the type that always needs lyrics in a song to really "feel" it but a few people including you show me that they aren't always necessary. The vibe the song was giving off was great and I never felt like something was missing. Reminded me a little bit of Jasper Byrne who writes (IMO) some of the best video game music.

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This sounds sweet! I'd love to hear some vocals on this!

I think the guitar tones are great, but are missing a little high end.

I personally don't like how the toms sound, but that's just personal preference.

that frikin crystals patch is amazing.

there is a few place I can hear a loop start over (I think its the bass)

other than that its superbly written and well executed!

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Yes... I like. It was a joy to be immersed in those rich tones and simplicity of structure.
Definitely set the ambient theme very well! Nice mellow tone on the intro clean. I think all the other layers are beautiful and fit really nicely in the mix.

The only thing I would change, very subjective, would be the drum/bass groove. I think a more laid back feel; so 1/4 notes on ride instead of 1/8 on hi-hat, and a more 1/4 note groove on bass could be something to try out. Or even alternate between the two?

Either way, very nice work! Keep it up

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Thank you everyone! I'm happy people are enjoying it. I commented back on everything anyone linked to! Any more comments or critique would be great!
Really nice track. Has a kind of post rock feel mixed with the ambient feels on some of the Juggernaut - Periphery Albums. The part onwards from 1:35 where there sounded like more high note parts were introduced was cool.

Nicely produced also coordinating and balancing the various parts.

C4C - https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1672636

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Hey man, cool song. It's certainly relaxing. The audio quality is pretty solid. The drums are a bit strange and seem a little lost in the mix. Perhaps that was intentional, since you were showing off the axe fx! (Jealous)... One other thing is that it takes a little too long to build. I couldn't tell if it was just silence at the beginning or if it was just slowly building. Overall, very good song. You have a good sense of melody.

C4C: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1672863
Simply gorgeous sound. The guitarwork is very calming. Reminds me a bit of Explosions In The Sky and a mellow Armor For Sleep. Could see this in a film. Well-produced and extremely clear. Love the ambience surrounding the instruments. Drums and bass don't have a whole lot going on, but it suits the track nicely. Liking the drum fills and soft thumping bass lines.