I think this is your best so far. Good use of the diminished 5th and the occasional other chromatic notes. I feel the tonalities in this piece had more to say. on occasion your hammered notes lacked a bit of strength compared to their neighboring notes.

I wonder what that would sound like with a softer lead sound (a little less top or treble)

Good work
Your criticism is truly impressive, it seems that you can see exactly the notes that I play. I'm trying to do my best, I'm in a very incipient stage in the art of soloing. I am aware of inaccuracies, but at the moment is still hard to do better. Deeply grateful for your attention. Master words always encourage.