I found this buried in my guitar tabs, and I figured there's no harm in sharing it to see what people think. Don't expect much, I wrote this back in my freshman year or so . I still really like the intro so I wanna hear other people's thoughts.
The intro sounds like a different song from the rest, although it all really sounds good, I like it but as I said before the intro sounds more like a rock piece and the rest like metal, i imagine killswitch engage meets skidrow. I like the harmonized rhythm beginning at bar42, i would suggest that being a main riff which you could derive an intro from and then use the rest to fill the chorus and build up imo but all in all its great even if you wanted to keep it all as one song though i suggest splitting the intro off into its own into another piece.