Overall pretty good. Timing is slightly off at times and there is a bit of muddiness here and there, but that's expected in a one pass recording. Solo could use a little bit more work, but again hard to nail it all in one take! I liked some of the little licks you added/adjusted that aren't in the original.

Also, I'm sure it's not intentional, but it looks like you are giving the camera the finger quite a bit, haha.

Here's mine for critique:
You have a very good feel. I agree with the guy above, timing is slightly off sometimes, I notice it during the verse chords, just ever so slightly. I also think you should work more on the solo, especially on the vibrato and bends. But I have to say I think you did a very good job (a hell of a lot better than I can, as well).

Critique mine?
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