#2
Dude, you are playing the wrong sections over the backing track (the verse riff seems to start at 0:39, but you still keep on playing the intro/chorus riff - and the chorus riff should start at 1:11 and that's when you start playing the verse riff). Pay attention to the bass notes - you can hear the chords you are playing don't fit the bassline, and that's because you are playing verse riff over chorus bassline and chorus riff over verse bassline. Also, you lead (at around 0:32) was a quarter note late or something (considering that it was supposed to be the same as on the album version).

Just not good. Use your ears.
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Last edited by MaggaraMarine at Mar 21, 2015,