What kind of set up are you using to record audio/video. The video quality is great in HD, it could be better lit, and you could be a little further back from the camera. Audio wise the volume fluctuates dramatically and there is a TON of pick noise. It seems like you are using the camera to capture the guitar audio, are you using it to capture the song as well? or did you place the recording against the original audio?

As far as your playing goes, it seems alright, its hard to tell how exact you are just because the audio is hard to listen to with the fluctuation in volume.

C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1673348