#2
I thought it was really good overall. Few comments:

1:32ish seemed like a few of the notes were a bit off in the vocals.

I'd never heard this song before, so I youtubed it -- I think I like your version much better.

Your D# seems a bit muddy at times. You might be hitting extra open strings un-intended. Also, I think you know this, but you transition to it in parts (first the high strings, then the low strings), but you still hit the low strings before your fingers have moved.

Anyway, nice job. Here's mine:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1672906
#3
Quote by gackerjr
I thought it was really good overall. Few comments:

1:32ish seemed like a few of the notes were a bit off in the vocals.

I'd never heard this song before, so I youtubed it -- I think I like your version much better.

Your D# seems a bit muddy at times. You might be hitting extra open strings un-intended. Also, I think you know this, but you transition to it in parts (first the high strings, then the low strings), but you still hit the low strings before your fingers have moved.

Anyway, nice job. Here's mine:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1672906


So you mean that before I actually strum the strings, I make sure that my fingers are already on the actual chords?