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Very nice, the vocals are preformed and mixed very well. Some parts of the mix are a little muddy, the louder parts become very unclear to the listener and the choir in the background of some parts is very overpowering and distracting to my ear, particularly the lower choir. The higher choir parts fit pretty well.

Wanna criticize mine?

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=33332133
Fender MIM Strat HSS (DiMarzio Crunch Lab)
Peavey 6505+ 112

If you want, I can mix/master your tracks for free just so I can practice and who knows, maybe you'll love what you hear! Hit me up.