#1
It's been quite some time since I last posted any original material here. I've been very busy these last months, but I managed to take a few hours to compose and record a riff for Fluff's Riffs and Beards 2 contest.

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Yeah, no video. Link me to your entry, I'll be more than glad to listen to it and comment.
#2
Is it that bad for no one to comment on it? Don't be afraid to be harsh, if I couldn't take it I wouldn't post it.
#3
It is actually a solid riff, decent submission for what I am assuming is a riff competition. There are some notes towards the latter part that draw away some of the overall intensity of the riff, but otherwise pretty solid. Keep it up man
#4
Sorry it took me so long to give back criticism; just moved and didn't have internet for a couple of days. Cool riff, but I do feel like some notes are a bit too much, especially towards the end like iaresanchez said. Maybe try and make it a bit more minimal.
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#7
Sorry for the double post but man
Your riff totally fits the drum track. I spent this whole day listening to entrys and most dont even fit the track xp