This is kind of my first submission of song writing to a public area - Im in a covers band but really want to create my own music. Any advice, criticism, abuse etc welcomed..

She can pull the sunlight from me
The fight is gone, this race is run
She wastes my money and precious time
The summers gone, autumn leaves
Lets just shut it down
Lets go shut it down

She can twist the fabric of my mind
Friends are gone, nothing left
She broke the promise and the trusts
Spring has gone, Winter winds
Let just shut it down
Lets go shut it down

Yet She lights the fuse amongst my thought
Hope is wrought, broken will
She made the best of that is me
Winders’ died, so are we
Let’s just shut it down
Let’s go shut it down
Last edited by Hamsterspanker at Apr 4, 2015,