#1
"Tell Me Everything's Okay..."

What good is it to you to see me fall?
How could I have known you'd trade it all?
Clip your angel's wings, let me hit the ground
How's it feel to lose what you never found?

Tell me everything's okay
Tell me everything's okay
Stay with me for one more night
Let me know you've seen the light
Just tell me everything's okay

Who am I to you besides a broken dream?
Just tell me the truth, are you who you seem?
I'd give you all I have just to keep you near
Can't you understand? Am I not speaking clear?

Tell me everything's okay
Tell me everything's okay
Even if they're not, just lie
I swear I'll never ask you why
Just tell me everything's okay

A work in progress
#2
nice, i like it! will this turn into a final song?

btw: check out 'Braheny - The Craft & Business of Song Writing' if you haven't already ;-)
#3
Quote by Neojunk
nice, i like it! will this turn into a final song?

btw: check out 'Braheny - The Craft & Business of Song Writing' if you haven't already ;-)


Thanks! And I think I'm keeping it the way it is, but yes. I tried uploading it to Soundcloud but my computer's being a twatrocket...

I haven't, I'll definitely check that out
#4
very nice. 7/10
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