#1
Hey guys. Can you give this a listen and tell me where I may be going wrong and where I should focus on to improve my playing?

http://vertostudio.com/pub/recordings/layla_take1.m4a

Any suggestions would be greatly appreciated.
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Taylor Big Baby
Agile 3100 CSB
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Okko Dominator, Big muff pi, cs3, dd3, ch1, ts9, ad9, classic wah
#2
There's a few mistakes which need fixed, mostly down to you muting some notes in your chords. A few others when you just missed a note or two.
You're also cutting some notes a bit short (I assume to give you time to get to the next note or chord).


You need to work on your timing. Listen to the verse riff both at the start and at the end and hear how much you sped up.
Last edited by derek8520 at Apr 7, 2015,
#3
Sounds like I should be working harder on my chord changes then?
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Taylor Big Baby
Agile 3100 CSB
Peavey classic 30/112
Okko Dominator, Big muff pi, cs3, dd3, ch1, ts9, ad9, classic wah
#4
Quote by mlfarrell
Sounds like I should be working harder on my chord changes then?



Yes, and the other things I mentioned.