#1
Want

To come

Out and

Play


But

You broke

My toy


While you're

Playing

Doctor

I should see the nurse


But

You broke

My toy
#3
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#6
this piece seemed oddly sexual ("i want to play""playing doctor" "i should see the nurse" "broke my toy") but it also didn't in a way and had a very innocent aspect if you read it from a certain perspective. I love how OP was able to capture that so well. Very good piece, and i hope to see more from this writer
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