#2
As far as riffing goes, that was kick ass dude. It had good punch to the riff and the tones were nice. Perhaps you could have altered the rhythm with the last sections of the riff, that would have added to the whole effect of it.

Technically brilliant playing.

Cheers!

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#3
Cool riff, man! I personally reckon the tone could've been a bit more crisp sounding? Try upping the mids, turn down the bass and drive a little. The drums had a nice punch to them which I don't think the guitar quite lived up to, but it only takes a few small alterations! The playing is tight so keep that up

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