#1
darling, there’s no feeling today
another dull ache
draw myself
in a long line
the dirty street, the bus stop
all the time i got
these thoughts
coloring the eye shut
ashen grey and hard luck,
all is but don’t seem, and
all the time

and all the time
#2
LOVE THIS. The imagery is awesome, and i can really relate to these lyrics. Good job.

I think it would go great as a reggae or blues song.

9/10
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