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Hey everybody I was wondering if I could get some feedback on this song I wrote:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=swogYqd_xb0

I also edited the video hehe.

Lyrics:

Everyday I wear a mask
And play chess with kings and gnomes
Acting on stage, as if i knew my name
but deep down inside in the rabbit hole
Im lost in a maze
Its falling falling
I might be, insane
Im calling, calling

Help from above
Push from below
Please show please show me
Who's the actorx2
Ohhh

Everyday I accelarate
Not quite sure if i wanna crash
Its shining bright
But it burns my eyes
Name calling, start a fight
I'm not quite sure if its
Red or green
Boom its done
Im in the scene

Im screaming, im screaming
Can't rationalize
I'm bleeding, im bleeding
Someone save my life
Help from above
Push from below
Please show please show me
Who's the driver
Ohhh
Please show please show me
Who's the passenger